你好:我就给楼上的学妹提点意见吧···There are so much books in the school libraryso much 应改为so many因为book是可数的the maginzine 中maginzine是可数的,所以应该加sbreath the flesh air中breath是名词,应该用动词breathe。What a wonderful thing for our student's spirits.中student's应该改为students’因为并不是一个学生,而是很多学生。谢谢。。。希望对你有帮助。
There are so much books in the school library,for example,the story books,the maginzine ,and so on. We can also look up some useful things in the E-room.I usually study there in my spare time.From the window of our library,we can see some beautiful trees and flowers.Smelling the flowers and breath the flesh air--What a wonderful thing for our student's spirits.