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  • 请大家帮我看下这篇作文四级能得多少分??

    every year the CCTV will have a the Spring Festival Gala. mostly every family at the day will open TV watch the Spring Festival Gala. maybe most people watch the Spring Festival Gala as a custom, many people like the Spring Festival Gala,at the Spring Festival Gala we can see popular singer and our favours actor we can see the talk show that very hummers. the most important is that we can with our family together.a coin has two sides,some people think the Spring Festival Gala should be cancel. because they think the Spring Festival Gala have no change for many years and the actor always no change.in my opinion,seeing the Spring Festival Gala with our family have become a custom. the progress on the Spring Festival Gala is not very important. the most important is the feeling that all family together..

    提问者:whanwff1

    发布于2010-09-16

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  • 武幻时空 丨Lv 3
    我的意见是5~7分(15分满分)一,在第一段中存在着较多的拼写错误,如favours、hummers,这是较低级的错误,被发现很容易影响分数。二、文章在句式、选词上十分单一,如no change,all family togerther等处,没有新意,观点也是完全重复,很难给阅卷人留下好的印象鉴于文章的语法错误较少,可给5~7分
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